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ok this is a short comic that I did a while ago to one of my friends.. The story isn't really good, and the artwork sucks.. I know.. But well.. Since I haven't ever upload a strip (not even in my old account), I guess i can give it a try.. The dialogs are in spanish (believe it or not, i'm a spanish speaker.. So I would translate them here, it goes something like this:
1st panel: I met her in one of those parties where you can lose your self and forget reality. I'd spend a while talking with my friends, until I saw her in the middle of the crowd.. She was the most beautiful thing I'd ever seen. I went to talk with her, and it seems that I did a good impression, since when I went back to my home, I had her number on my pocket.
2nd panel: One day I gather some courage and I called her.. Her voice sounded even more sweet without the loud music.. At thet moment I realized that I wanted to hear that voice for the rest of my life.. Since there on we keep talking by fone, and we get to meet eachother more deeply. Every new thing I learnt about her made me want her even more.. Sometimes I wondered if she was real or only a really beautiful dream...
3rd panel: One day I went to pick her from her job, and asked her to go to walk by the park.
4th panel: She smiled and remained silent for what felt like an eternity...
5th panel: I imagined my self walking alone by the park, regreting have gone so fast..
6th panel: After some really long minutes of anguish, she accepted and we went togheter to the park..
7th panel: We swung like to little kids, and we talked about every kind of things.. Since global warming, to our favourite brand of candy... After a while we sat on a bench and we started to talk face to face... Suddenly she go closer to me and kissed me.. It was a sweet kiss, I didin't wanted it to end, and for moment it seemed that it won't.. But after a while we separated and smile.
8th pnael: Then we walk away from the park, holding our hands, smiling happily.. Talking about life and other things.. Knowing that for there on the will never be the same..

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Well, that's pretty much all.. I told you, the story sucks..
But anyway I hope you don't hate it that much.. Sorry if there are mistakes in the translation..
Have a nice day

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Algo lineal, pero me gustó la estética, me gustaría ver mas cosas así o,o

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XDD No es muy probable, sobre todo por cuestiones de tiempo..

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El tiempo siempre te mata, querida.

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Lo siento mi no comprender español ni english

whadoyousei?
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bonitooo
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Ouch >_o Tendré que ponerlo en breton quizas?

Me alegra que te agrade :)

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Si, definitivamente.. aunque en teoría para ti no es problema

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Yo viajo en el tiempo ;D

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Yep n_n Además de ser inmortal XD

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